After asking others to view my title sequence and ask for their feedback, many said that the catfishing narrative wasn't clear despite the voiceover monologue, so I decided to update my voiceover script to make the narrative of the antagonist losing her friends and creating a fake facebook account to catfish them for revenge. This is the updated voice over script:
"My name is Jade, but these people know me, as Elle. 83 million social media accounts are fake. One of them is me. Every friendship group has an outsider - and that was me. We were a tight-knit friendship group, we always had good time. We did everything together, until they pushed me out. Josh was always too busy for anyone, especially me. He didn't like being ignored back. Hannah was the pretty one, never me, and she knew it. Jasmine was the smartest. Not so smart these days though. I know more about them than they think. They have no idea. Caitlin was the leader of the group who made all the decsions, always. Not anymore. Together they thought they were so special. Me? I was the outsider."
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